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Students can easily access information online . So libraries are no longer important . To what extent do you agree or disagree .

Students can easily access information online. So libraries are no longer important. 8doek
When it comes to searching information students prefer internet, but libraries are still important. I partly agree with this statement. On the one hand, Internet should bring some obvious benefits. Internet is clearly able to give all information to students better than libraries, especially in studies that require high level accuracy in short time period. learners mostly prefer online data because internet is fastest mode of searching information, any data will come in no time and they don't need to go to library. For example, in universities, students have to make their assignments in very short time period. Due to web media, they don't need to go anywhere because they can access all data on their phones and laptops without waisting a time. On the other hand, libraries also have some obvious advantages. Libraries gives reliable information than internet. For instance, in libraries, mostly books are authorised by authors, which give accurate information to learners. Whereas, internet sometimes shows inaccurate data. Libraries are important not for only accurate information, but also for read silently. The ambience and peaceful environment of the library helps one to concentrate more on one's work or study. Thus, libraries will never become unnecessary. In conclusion, although advancement is very helpful in every field, the importance of the libraries for their own role cannot be put aside. I believe that, web media and libraries play an equal role in every field and they have their own importance.
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students prefer internet,
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. I partly
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with this statement.

On the one hand, Internet should bring
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obvious benefits. Internet is
clearly
able to give all
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information
to students better than libraries,
especially
in studies that require high level accuracy in short time period.
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learners
mostly
prefer online
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data
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because
internet is
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fastest
mode of searching
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information
, any
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data
will
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come
in no
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time and
they don't need to go to library.
For example
, in universities, students
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have to
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make
their assignments in
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very
short time period. Due to web media, they don't need to go anywhere
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because
they can access all
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data
on their phones and laptops without
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waisting
a time.

On the other hand
, libraries
also
have
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some
obvious advantages.
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reliable
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information
than internet.
For instance
, in libraries,
mostly
books are
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authorised
by authors, which give accurate
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information
to learners.
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, internet
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shows
inaccurate
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. Libraries are
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important
not for
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only
accurate
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,
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also
for read
silently
. The ambience and peaceful environment of the library
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helps
one to concentrate more on one's work or study.
Thus
, libraries will never become unnecessary.

In conclusion
, although advancement is
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very
helpful in every field, the importance of the libraries for their
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own
role cannot
be put
aside. I believe that, web media and libraries play an equal role in every
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field and
they have their
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own
importance.

IELTS essay Students can easily access information online. So libraries are no longer important.

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