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Chosing your masters program

Chosing your masters program VwJXO

I have chosen to study Master’s Program in United Kingdom because although the quality of education offered by academic institutions in Pakistan has improved noticeably over the years but the quality of education specially in engineering field is not mostly up to the industry standards and rely heavily on theoretical knowledge rather than practical knowledge and laboratory work that is provided in UK universities. I believe doing a master’s degree from UK will not only increase my in-depth knowledge and understanding of the field but it will also make my qualification recognized by organizations like Washington Accord and PEC (Pakistan Engineering Council) and give me a competitive edge in the industry.

I have chosen to study Master’s Program A determiner is probably missing here: "in the United Kingdom".in the United Kingdom
in United Kingdom
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 although the quality of education offered by academic institutions in Pakistan has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
noticeably
 over the years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the quality of education specially
 in engineering field is not mostly
 up to the industry standards and rely heavily
 on theoretical knowledge rather
 than practical knowledge and laboratory work that is provided
 in UK universities. I believe doing a master’s degree from UK will not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 increase my in-depth knowledge and understanding of the field This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it will also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 my qualification recognized by organizations like Washington Accord and PEC (Pakistan Engineering Council) and give me a competitive edge in the industry. 