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Some people opine that government officials and big companies are

Some people opine that government officials and big companies are EwnQr
Some people opine that government officials and big companies are solely responsible for make environment safe. Perhaps this is because they provide infrastructure amenities. For instance, road networks, Schools, Hospital, and other medical facilities to combat diseases and so on. However, such action might help to reduce unemployment jobs in the country. For example, during Covid pandemic a well-known film star Sonu Sood started many hospital facilities to treat patients which also lead to open many job vacancies. This can be the reason of people perspective to help environments.
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people
opine that
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government
officials and
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big
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companies
are
solely
responsible for
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make
environment safe. Perhaps this is
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because
they provide infrastructure amenities.
For instance
, road networks, Schools, Hospital, and other medical facilities to combat diseases and
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so
on.
However
, such action might
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to
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reduce
unemployment jobs in the country.
For example
, during
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Covid
pandemic a well-known film star
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Sonu
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Sood
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started
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many
hospital facilities to treat patients which
also
lead to open
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many
job vacancies. This can be the reason of
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people
perspective to
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help
environments.
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IELTS essay Some people opine that government officials and big companies are

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
89 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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