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Students at schools and universities learn from school teachers than other sources suchvas internet and television. Do you agree or disagree.

Students at schools and universities learn from school teachers than other sources suchvas internet and television. 6LqO8
Education is a basic need for the students and students learn it specifically from their school teachers than from other sources like internet and television. I agree with teachers contribution to teach students with best efforts. First of all, education is a world phenomenon to seek the bright future for students and it conders third eye of a human being. Mostly students learn their education from teachers at school and university level as teachers personal attraction with students pay the much benefits to the students and they can solve their problems personally with teachers and can immediately grasp it. On tge the other hand, students use the internet and television which directly affects on the eye sights of the students and decrease the visibility in long run and it also affects on the minds of the students. In example it is world study says that 90 percent of people specifically the teenagers are affected from internet devices which specifically affected on their brain and brain hemorrhage has been seen in the body of patients due to more use of internet. In conclusion, teachers have great role to give the better learnings and skills to students by providing them a better education rather than internet and other electronic devices and I agree with the same.
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is a basic need for the
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students
and
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specifically
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teachers
than from other sources like internet and television. I
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with best
efforts.
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First of all
,
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education
is a world phenomenon to seek the bright future for
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students
and
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it conders
third eye of a human being.
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students
learn their
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education
from
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teachers
at school and university level as
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teachers
personal attraction with
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students
pay the
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much
benefits to the
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students and
they can solve their problems
personally
with
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teachers
and can immediately grasp it. On
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the other hand,
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students
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the internet and television which
directly
affects on the
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eye sights
of the
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students
and decrease the visibility in long run and it
also
affects on the minds of the
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students
. In
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is world study says that 90 percent of
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specifically
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teenagers
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affected
from internet devices which
specifically
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affected
on their brain and brain hemorrhage has been
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seen
in the body of patients due to more
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use
of internet.
In conclusion
,
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teachers
have great role to give the better learnings and
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skills
to
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students
by providing them a better
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education
rather
than internet and other electronic devices and I
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IELTS essay Students at schools and universities learn from school teachers than other sources suchvas internet and television.

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