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stroke types effects on aphasia types. do you agree or disagree?

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Also, a recent study in this field has claimed that female gender and old age in both sexes are the causes of fluent aphasia (). According to the classical approach, there is a one-by-one relationship between language and brain function, and each language function is related to a specific area in the brain(). Several studies have been performed on people with aphasia from which the study of Young et al. (2008), claimed that aphasia is often caused by damage to sites associated with language function and its types are associated with the lesion location. whereas Bohara et al. (2015) examined the relationship between the location of the injury and the type of aphasia according to the classical view, this association was observed in only 35% of patients with aphasia.
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IELTS essay stroke types effects on aphasia types.

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