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stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world what are the reasons and solutions

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undoubtedly, depression are increasing in all around the world. majority of individual are suffering from strain and also mental disorder due to this. Number of reasons and solutions are emerged out behind it. to commence with, Wight suffer from a anxiety. due to hectic schedule and do not consume enough time with love one's then they put down in anxiety rapidly duing to this create family disputes and person become mentally upset. Secondly, junior face strain because and they face difficulty in study as well as parents keep pressure on thier minor

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, depression are increasing in all around the world. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMajority
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 of individual are suffering from strain and also
 mental disorder due to this. Number of reasons and solutions are emerged
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IELTS essay stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world what are the reasons and solutions

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American English

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