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stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world what are the reasons and solutions

stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world what are the reasons and solutions w6XE
undoubtedly, depression are increasing in all around the world. majority of individual are suffering from strain and also mental disorder due to this. Number of reasons and solutions are emerged out behind it. to commence with, Wight suffer from a anxiety. due to hectic schedule and do not consume enough time with love one's then they put down in anxiety rapidly duing to this create family disputes and person become mentally upset. Secondly, junior face strain because and they face difficulty in study as well as parents keep pressure on thier minor
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undoubtedly
, depression are increasing in all around the world.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
majority
of individual are suffering from strain and
also
mental disorder due to this. Number of reasons and solutions
are emerged
out behind it. to commence with, Wight
The singular proper name 'Wight' must be used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "suffers", "suffered".
suffer
from
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
anxiety.
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due
to hectic schedule and do not consume
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
time with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
one's then they put down in anxiety
rapidly
Possible spelling mistake found.
duing
to this create family disputes and person become mentally upset.
Secondly
, junior face strain
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
because and
they face difficulty in study
as well
as parents
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
pressure on
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thier
minor
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IELTS essay stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world what are the reasons and solutions

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  American English
1 paragraphs
91 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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