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steve jobs features and effect on the world

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Steve Jobs, founder of Apple company, created the biggest change in the digital world. He was brave, creative, and also had a significant risk tolerance consequently established a company that affected people’s lives and made life much easier than before. In later years, his invention results in digital transformation and contributed to the development of aerospace and the machine industries. Unfortunately, his life span wasn’t too long but his company was a suitable sample to encourage young people to become successful.

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change
 in the digital world.

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 tolerance consequently
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company
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affected
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 and made life much easier than This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
. In later years, his invention results in digital transformation and contributed to the development of aerospace and the machine industries.

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 to become successful. 