Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Some people say history is a subject that should be taught at schools , however, others claim other subjects such as technology is more important . Discuss both and give your idea?

Some people say history is a subject that should be taught at schools, however, others claim other subjects such as technology is more important. gGjm3

It goes beyond doubt that opting the most appropriate school subject, has been a concern for all countries' education system. In this respect, although some individuals claim that history is an unseperable subject, it is believed by others that technology has a higher importance. Yet, from my standpoint, not only is technology beneficial but also history has an equal significance. It goes beyond doubt that opting the most appropriate school subject, has been a concern for all countries' education system. In this respect, although some individuals claim that history is an unseperable subject, it is believed by others that technology has a higher importance. Yet, from my standpoint, not only is technology beneficial but also history has an equal significance. It goes beyond doubt that opting the most appropriate school subject, has been a concern for all countries' education system. In this respect, although some individuals claim that history is an unseperable subject, it is believed by others that technology has a higher importance. Yet, from my standpoint, not only is technology beneficial but also history has an equal significance.

It goes beyond doubt that opting the most appropriate school You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexposedsusceptibleconditionalaccountableaptsensitive
subject
, has been a concern for all countries' education system. In this respect, although This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 individuals claim that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpast
history
 is an Possible spelling mistake found.inseparableinsuperableinseverableunseeable
unseperable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexposedsusceptibleconditionalaccountableaptsensitive
subject
, it is believed
 by others that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 has a higher importance. Yet
, from my standpoint, not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 beneficial This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpast
history
 has an equal significance. It goes beyond doubt that opting the most appropriate school You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexposedsusceptibleconditionalaccountableaptsensitive
subject
, has been a concern for all countries' education system. In this respect, although This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 individuals claim that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpast
history
 is an Possible spelling mistake found.inseparableinsuperableinseverableunseeable
unseperable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexposedsusceptibleconditionalaccountableaptsensitive
subject
, it is believed
 by others that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 has a higher importance. Yet
, from my standpoint, not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 beneficial This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpast
history
 has an equal significance.

It goes beyond doubt that opting the most appropriate school You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexposedsusceptibleconditionalaccountableaptsensitive
subject
, has been a concern for all countries' education system. In this respect, although This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 individuals claim that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpast
history
 is an Possible spelling mistake found.inseparableinsuperableinseverableunseeable
unseperable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexposedsusceptibleconditionalaccountableaptsensitive
subject
, it is believed
 by others that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 has a higher importance. Yet
, from my standpoint, not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 beneficial This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpast
history
 has an equal significance. 