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.I subscribe to the notion that advertising exert bearing on individuals lives so that I completely agree to that government should shoulder the responsibility to impose strict laws on them.Some people advocate that various forms of propaganda should be banned due to they have either no bearing or negative impact on people.

. I subscribe to the notion that advertising exert bearing on individuals lives so that I completely agree to that government should shoulder the responsibility to impose strict laws on them. Some people advocate that various forms of propaganda should be banned due to they have either no bearing or negative impact on people. Orj97

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