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STATEMENT OF PURPOSE for university

STATEMENT OF PURPOSE for university RW0AG
From an early age, I was fascinated by the idea of how the systems in industries work. How are the things of our daily lives like T. V, cars, fans, light bulbs, home utility equipment like washing machines, microwave oven, fridge, juicer, and much more work and how are they made. Thus to satisfy my curiosity, I searched as to which field is responsible for these things and came to the conclusion of mechanical engineering. This curiosity and enthusiasm drove me to take the undergrad program in Mechanical Engineering. It is defined as the study, design, development, construction, and testing of mechanical and thermal sensors and devices, including tools, engines, and machines which help develop types of equipment used in every field. During my undergraduate studies, I came to learn some subjects which piqued my curiosity like Oil Hydraulics And Pneumatics, Fluid Mechanics and Fluid Machines, Engineering Thermodynamics, Power Plant Engineering, Fluid Power Engineering, Gas Dynamics, Steam and Gas Turbines. These subjects gave me a sense of a whole new aspect of mechanical engineering. They provided me with detailed knowledge and gave me a solid framework of how oil and gas are used in industries for refining, as well as for producing electricity in power plants and also for many more purposes. These industries provide a challenging environment as processes related to them are both complex and difficult. Upon researching I concluded that oil and gas industries have a huge scope for development for me both personally and from a career point of view. Thus, my passion for technology and fascination of learning has sown the seeds of motivation to study further in this field and therefore, I have opted for a Master in Oil and Gas Engineering from Memorial University. As for my academics, I completed my secondary and higher secondary education in 2015 and 2017 respectively from the Gujarat Secondary and Higher Secondary Education Board. Subsequently, I am pursuing my Bachelors in Mechanical Engineering from Vadodara Institute of Engineering. At present, I am in the 7th semester of my education and my current CGPA is 8. 97, I want to assure you that the same performance can be expected from me in my remaining semester. I can aver that I have gained immense knowledge in the field of mechanical engineering since primary zones of simple as well as advanced correspondence of this field were covered in the subjects that I learned during my curriculum. I am also exceptionally compatible with AUTODESK INVENTOR and SOLIDWORKS software. Talking about the Projects, I am currently working on a project “AUTOMATIC CENTRAL BIKE STAND” this project helps in lifting the bike very conveniently and automatically. The project aims to diminish the non-essential effort applied by the users to set a stand for the bike. It is also very helpful when it comes to the elder people, women and physically challenged people. It is also helpful in mounting heavy motorcycles. Moreover, I am leading my team and effectively managing all the possible resources. I can effectively organize the tasks and distribute them to group members. With efforts provided for the same, we will complete the project very soon. My years of undergraduate study furnished me with the elementary knowledge of Additive Manufacturing, Control Engineering, Tool Engineering, Flexible Manufacturing system; Computer-aided Machine Drawing, Machine Design. These encouraged me to explore novel concepts. Creativity and logic are the most notable constituents which are obligatory for doing simple tasks which ignites me towards the never-ending chase of knowledge and makes this pitch-perfect sphere for me. Thus, it’s an opportunity for me to follow my undergraduate education at a more advanced level and gain knowledge with technical dexterity. In this modern world, Engineers with a master's degree are academically sound and technically skilled professionals who are working at the grass-root level to take on challenges and the endless propel of modern technology. It is to be a significant contributor to the field that has persuaded me to equip myself with a master’s education. With the acquired education and exposure to the field, I have realised that I lack the technical knowledge and expertise as the Indian education system focuses on theoretical based learning. Hence, to fulfil my needs for practical exposure and skills, I believe that the proposed program offered at your globally reputed university will be the next crucial step for me in shaping my career. The Memorial University is one of Canada's top teaching and research universities, with an international reputation for excellence across the humanities, sciences, creative arts, business, engineering and health sciences. Within a vibrant and supportive learning environment, the Memorial University discovers, disseminates and applies new knowledge through teaching and learning, research and creative activity, community involvement and partnerships. The university aims to inspire the human spirit through outstanding achievements in learning, discovery and citizenship in a creative community. Moreover, the course curriculum of the Memorial University, include studies related to fields like offshore oil and gas operations, safety, risk and environmental management, reservoir engineering, drilling engineering, enhanced oil recovery, natural gas engineering, subsea system, also subjects like Energy systems, Mechanical, oil and gas process, Safety and Risk Management, are a part of it which align perfectly with my interests and will help me in developing my future. After completing my studies in Canada, I intend to return to my home country and serve it with cutting edge excellence. As my country has an international reach, persisting with adequate career opportunities, providing me with a wide scope for jobs. Also, an international degree will give me an edge over other candidates. Moreover, this enhancement will boost my career with knowledge, skill and experience as well as open doors for me to work in Chemical Industries like ONGC, IPCL, Pidilite Industries Ltd, Tata Chemicals Ltd, Aarti Industries Ltd, and such others. I hope your committee will consider my application for admission for the upcoming semester. I look forward to hearing from you soon and if you have any queries, please feel free to contact me via email at jaydeepparmar190620@gmail. com Regards,
From an early age, I
was fascinated
by the
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idea
of how the
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systems
in
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industries
work. How are the things of our daily
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lives
like T. V, cars, fans, light bulbs, home utility equipment like washing
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machines
, microwave oven, fridge, juicer, and much more work and how are they made.
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Thus
to satisfy my curiosity, I searched as to which
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field
is responsible for these things and came to the conclusion of
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mechanical
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engineering
. This curiosity and enthusiasm drove me to take the undergrad program in
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Mechanical
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Engineering
. It
is defined
as the
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study
, design, development, construction, and testing of
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mechanical
and thermal sensors and devices, including tools, engines, and
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machines
which
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help
develop types of equipment
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used
in every
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field
. During my undergraduate
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studies
, I came to learn
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some
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subjects
which piqued my curiosity like
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Oil
Hydraulics And Pneumatics, Fluid Mechanics and Fluid
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Machines
,
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Engineering
Thermodynamics, Power Plant
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Engineering
, Fluid Power
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Engineering
,
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Gas
Dynamics, Steam and
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Gas
Turbines. These
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subjects
gave me a sense of a whole new aspect of
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mechanical
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engineering
. They provided me with detailed
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knowledge
and gave me a solid framework of how
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oil
and
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gas
are
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used
in
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industries
for refining,
as well
as for producing electricity in power plants and
also
for
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many
more purposes. These
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industries
provide a challenging environment as processes related to them are both complex and difficult. Upon researching I concluded that
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oil
and
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gas
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industries
have a huge scope for development for me both
personally
and from a career point of view.
Thus
, my passion for technology and fascination of
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learning
has sown the seeds of motivation to
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study
further
in this
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field
and
therefore
, I have opted for a Master in
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Oil
and
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Gas
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Engineering
from Memorial University.

As for my academics, I completed my
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secondary
and higher
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secondary
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education
in 2015 and 2017
respectively
from the Gujarat
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Secondary
and Higher
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Secondary
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Education
Board.
Subsequently
, I am pursuing my Bachelors in
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Mechanical
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Engineering
from Vadodara Institute of
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Engineering
. At present, I am in the 7th semester of my
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education
and my
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current
CGPA is 8. 97, I want to assure you that the same performance can be
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expected
from me in my remaining semester. I can aver that I have gained immense
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knowledge
in the
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field
of
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mechanical
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engineering
since primary zones of simple
as well
as advanced correspondence of this
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field
were covered
in the
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subjects
that I learned during my curriculum. I am
also
exceptionally
compatible with AUTODESK INVENTOR and
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SOLIDWORKS
software.

Talking about the
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Projects
, I am
currently
working on a
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project
“AUTOMATIC CENTRAL BIKE STAND” this
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project
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helps
in lifting the bike
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very
conveniently
and
automatically
. The
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project
aims to diminish the non-essential effort applied by the users to set a stand for the bike. It is
also
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very
helpful when it
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comes
to the elder
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people
, women and
physically
challenged
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people
. It is
also
helpful in mounting heavy motorcycles.
Moreover
, I am leading my team and
effectively
managing all the possible resources. I can
effectively
organize the tasks and distribute them to group members. With efforts provided for the same, we will complete the
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project
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very
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soon
.

My years of undergraduate
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study
furnished me with the elementary
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knowledge
of Additive Manufacturing, Control
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Engineering
, Tool
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Engineering
, Flexible Manufacturing
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system
; Computer-aided
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Machine
Drawing,
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Machine
Design. These encouraged me to explore novel concepts. Creativity and logic are the most notable constituents which are obligatory for doing simple tasks which ignites me towards the never-ending chase of
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knowledge
and
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makes
this pitch-perfect sphere for me.
Thus
, it’s an opportunity for me to follow my undergraduate
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education
at a more advanced level and gain
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
knowledge
with technical dexterity. In this modern world, Engineers with a master's degree are
academically
sound and
technically
skilled professionals who are working at the grass-root level to take on challenges and the endless propel of modern technology. It is to be a significant contributor to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
field
that has persuaded me to equip myself with a master’s
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
. With the acquired
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education
and exposure to the
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field
, I have
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realised
that I lack the technical
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knowledge
and expertise as the Indian
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education
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system
focuses on theoretical based
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learning
.
Hence
, to fulfil my needs for practical exposure and
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skills
, I believe that the proposed program offered at your globally reputed
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university
will be the
next
crucial step for me in shaping my career.

The Memorial
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University
is one of Canada's top teaching and research
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universities
, with an international reputation for excellence across the humanities, sciences, creative arts, business,
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engineering
and health sciences. Within a vibrant and supportive
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learning
environment, the Memorial
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University
discovers, disseminates and applies new
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knowledge
through teaching and
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learning
, research and creative activity, community involvement and partnerships. The
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university
aims to inspire the human spirit through outstanding achievements in
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learning
, discovery and citizenship in a creative community.
Moreover
, the course curriculum of the Memorial
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University
, include
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studies
related to
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fields
like offshore
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oil
and
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gas
operations, safety,
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risk
and environmental management, reservoir
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engineering
, drilling
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engineering
, enhanced
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oil
recovery, natural
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gas
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engineering
,
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subsea
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system
,
also
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subjects
like Energy
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systems
,
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Mechanical
,
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oil
and
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gas
process, Safety and
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Risk
Management, are a part of it which align
perfectly
with my interests and will
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help
me in developing my future.

After completing my
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studies
in Canada, I intend to return to my home country and serve it with cutting edge excellence. As my country has an international reach, persisting with adequate career opportunities, providing me with a wide scope for jobs.
Also
, an international degree will give me an edge over other candidates.
Moreover
, this enhancement will boost my career with
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knowledge
,
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skill
and experience
as well
as open doors for me to work in Chemical
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Industries
like
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ONGC
,
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IPCL
,
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Pidilite
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Industries
Ltd, Tata Chemicals Ltd,
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Aarti
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Industries
Ltd, and such others.

I hope your committee will consider my application for admission for the upcoming semester. I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
and if you have any queries,
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please
feel free to contact me via email at jaydeepparmar190620@gmail.
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com


Regards,
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IELTS essay STATEMENT OF PURPOSE for university

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
1008 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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