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Choose career in the future

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My dream career in the future is to be an English teacher when I leave University. I am studying at Hue University Foreign of Languages and my major is English Language. Although, I learn in English Language but I always enjoy becoming an English teacher. In Fact, I am fascinated about English. I have been learned a second language, which make me be keen on and to be proud of. Not only about language but also cultural and traditional of Europe. However, I know that teaching English is not easy job, it is expect many different factors. I must improving my knowledge, be patient, confident and generosity. Moreover, teacher also facing with a lot of stress, such as: grades, teaching methods and student. In general, teacher is a challenging job, but I always choose to pursue my dream because it is a long journey.
My dream career in the future is to be an English
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University. I am studying at Hue University Foreign of
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and my major is English
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. Although, I learn in English
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I always enjoy becoming an English
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. In Fact, I
am fascinated
about English. I have
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a second
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language
, which
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me be keen on and to be proud of. Not
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about
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language
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also
cultural and traditional of Europe.
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, I know that teaching English is not easy job, it is
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different
factors. I
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improving my knowledge, be patient, confident and generosity.
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teacher
also
facing with
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a lot of
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stress
, such as: grades, teaching methods and student.
In general
,
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teacher
is a challenging job,
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I always choose to pursue my dream
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it is a long journey.

IELTS essay Choose career in the future

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
144 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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