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statement of purpose for college essay

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Life changes when you do something new in your life and I did not expect that my life would change like this. I had an information technology subject in high school in which I had to make a project using loops in c++ which was new to me. In the project, I had to find prime numbers between 1 to 100. The loop was a bit difficult to use as I had never done it before. I asked my teacher for help and he gave me a book of C++. Read that book continuously for four days but there were some signs which I could not understand. Then I watched some videos and asked many people because there is no computer science engineer in my house. Eventually, I worked very hard to bear the loop after about a week my program became correct. I had seen that with programming, I could create whatever I want and new things as well. I was the first girl in my home who did programming and took the decision to become a computer science engineer.

Life This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 when you do something new in your life and I did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 that my life would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 like this. I had an information technology subject in high school in which I had to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a project using loops in c++ which was new to me. In the project, I had to find prime numbers Use "between" + "and" not "to."  Try this: "between 1 and 100".between 1 and 100
between 1 to 100
. The loop was a bit difficult to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 as I had never done it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
. I asked my teacher for Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).help, and
help and
 he gave me a book of C++. Read that book continuously
 for four days This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 there were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 signs which I could not understand. Then I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
watched
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 videos and asked This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 there is no computer science engineer in my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. Eventually
, I worked This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to bear the loop after about a week my program became correct. I had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that with programming, I could create whatever I want and new things as well
. I was the first
 girl in my home who The usual collocation for an activity ending in "-ing" is "go" not "do" or "play." Revise: "went programming".went programming
did programming
 and took the decision to become a computer science engineer. 