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Future planning plays an essential part of our life as per an American writer. But, Isn't it that people forgets to live in present while always worrying about future outcome? This essay will argue about beneficial of future planning and also how much it affects our present life. From early age, we started observing our parents planning for financial stability and our education, which help them achieve their targets subtly. A well organised plan make you risk free for your future and it is crucial for the family. What most people forgets about is in adulthood, when one is their prime age that it's not going to last forever, so it is a necessity to draw a framework for their older age and their family members. However, It is important to realise that one should not forget to live in present and spend quality time with their loved ones because future outcome is an unknown probability. No matter how hard you will try to plan and predict but, it may not go as planned which often leave one in stress and anxiety. For example, I have seen my father living in different city than us for a better job to secure future, due to this he missed out on living with their family and lived a depressed and worried life. To conclude, I must say that making arrangements for future is one of the crucial aspects for everyone, although most of the time it often keeps you away from present happiness.

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present
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 outcome? This essay will argue about beneficial of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprospectiveeventualsubsequentplannedimminentforthcoming
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 planning and also
 how much it affects our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrent
present
 life.

From early age, we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
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help
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well organised
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make
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risk
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future
 and it is crucial for the family. What most This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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forgets
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so
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important
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realise
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live
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present
 and spend quality time with their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiredadored
loved
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because
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprospectiveeventualsubsequentplannedimminentforthcoming
future
 outcome is an unknown probability. No matter how This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 you will try to plan and predict This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
, it may not go as planned which This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 one in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 and anxiety. For example
, I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 my father living in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 city than us for a better job to secure You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprospectiveeventualsubsequentplannedimminentforthcoming
future
, due to this he missed out on living with their family and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resided
lived
 a depressed and worried life.

To conclude
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 say that making arrangements for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprospectiveeventualsubsequentplannedimminentforthcoming
future
 is one of the crucial aspects for everyone, although most of the time it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retains
keeps
 you away from You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrent
present
 happiness. 