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interesting places to visit

interesting places to visit 11RYN

Yes, you can visit Ba Đình square, this is the place where the body of the beloved leader Ho Chi Minh is kept. If you like to know about Vietnamese culture and traditions, you can vistit the ancient city of Hanoi. It is located to the west and north of Hoan Kiem Lake, where the population is densely populated with 36 streets. Each street here mainly focuses on selling a certain type of item. When you came there, you definitely admire the Cathedral, it is beautiful that designed in European style.

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