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Sport stars are paid too much for what they do . Do you agree or disagree wih this statement.

Sport stars are paid too much for what they do. MM3V6

Clearly, sport stars take a huge amount of money as a salary for even minor jobs, though, their earnings are more than others in career and I agree that players are worthy for it. In this essay, I will highlight both their hard working and payment which they are paid. To begin with, they must work hard on theirselves to achieve popularity and become sport star, as, competing against sportsmen is the most complexed, by contrast, other jobs. Let us take football stars as an example, they did not get this rewarding stage easily. Moreover, competition for leadership is not for any player, since, thousands of people do it, so, their takings makes up million dollars fairly. On the other side, all players are not paid more, because, all managers cannot effort to pay high salary. One more thing is the more players work out, the higher cash will be. To conclude, sport stars are worthy for take much salary because of difficult background and making more money depends on their ability and training.

Clearly
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stars
 take a huge amount of money as a salary for even minor jobs, though, their earnings are more than others in career and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
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players
 are worthy for it. In this essay, I will highlight both their This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.hard-workinghardworking
hard working
 and payment which they are paid
.

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begin
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must
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hard
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theirselves
 to achieve popularity and become sport star, as, competing against sportsmen is the most Possible spelling mistake found.completedcomplexes
complexed
, by contrast, other jobs. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 us take football You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheronamecelebrityfavoriteidolsuperstar
stars
 as an example, they did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 this rewarding stage easily
. Moreover
, competition for leadership is not for any You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompetitorathleteparticipantmemberrookieprofessional
player
, since, thousands of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 do it, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, their takings This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 up million dollars fairly
.

On the other side, all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompetitorathleteparticipantmemberrookieprofessional
players
 are not paid more, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
, all managers cannot effort to pay high salary. One more thing is the more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompetitorathleteparticipantmemberrookieprofessional
players
 work out, the higher cash will be.

To conclude
, sport You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheronamecelebrityfavoriteidolsuperstar
stars
 are worthy for take much salary This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of difficult background and making more money depends on their ability and training. 