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Sport occupies an important place in our life. Because playing sports is one of the most useful types of exercise for our health. For example, I am fascinated by going swimming every day because it helps me to maneuver flexibly underwater. When that, I feel very comfortable because it relieves stress well. Additionally, having interactions between playmates helps people have smarter relationships. People will talk to each other about sport, discuss ways and advice to play better. In conclusion, sport not only helps us stay healthy, but also connects our relationships.

Sport occupies an important place in our life. Because playing sports is one of the most useful types of exercise for our health. For example, I am fascinated by going swimming every day because it helps me to maneuver flexibly underwater. When that, I feel very comfortable because it relieves stress well. Additionally, having interactions between playmates helps people have smarter relationships. People will talk to each other about sport, discuss ways and advice to play better. In conclusion, sport not only helps us stay healthy, but also connects our relationships. 2xQV6

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