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Do you think that people in your country obey the law all the time?

Do you think that people in your country obey the law all the time? 6KoPB
Many people, in addition to those who obey the rules, continue to defy the law and violate traffic laws. When there is no red light at a junction, for example, drivers will run through it. There are also other articles regarding the covid pandemic to read. The state enacts legislation prohibiting large-scale gatherings. However, some people continue to disobey the law and congregate in large groups, resulting in an increasingly dangerous pandemic scenario.
Many
people
,
in addition
to those who obey the
rules
, continue to defy the law and violate traffic laws. When there is no red light at a junction,
for example
, drivers will run through it. There are
also
other articles regarding the
covid
pandemic to read. The state enacts legislation prohibiting large-scale gatherings.
However
,
some
people
continue to disobey the law and congregate in large groups, resulting in an
increasingly
dangerous
pandemic scenario.
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IELTS essay Do you think that people in your country obey the law all the time?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
73 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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