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one facility which was not available twenty years ago and write a short desciption of how students in the past studied without that facility

one facility which was not available twenty years ago and write a short desciption of how students in the past studied without that facility QK7QK

one facility which was not available twenty years ago is the laptop. In the past, they didn't have the Internet to use and it didn't have modern equipment as now. It is the reason why in the past didn't have a laptop. The laptop is used for studies and look for. It makes the study more convenient. It helps them find out everything they need. In the past, students didn't have a laptop. It is difficult for them. For example, when being asked to write an assignment about a problem. They had to go to the library, look for books on the topic, read books, and hand-write any information that they thought was useful for their assignment. It was very inconvenient. I think this is a big change. This change has helped students study more convenient

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one
 facility which was not available twenty years ago is the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
. In the past, they didn't have the Internet to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 and it didn't have modern equipment as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. It is the reason why in the past didn't have a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for studies and look for. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 the study more convenient. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 them find out everything they need. In the past, students didn't have a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
. It is difficult for them. For example
, when being asked
 to write an assignment about a problem. They had to go to the library, look for books on the topic, read books, and hand-write any information that they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 was useful for their assignment. It was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 inconvenient. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 this is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
. This This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
 students study more Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphconvenient.convenient!convenient?convenient:convenient,convenient;
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