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Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. AkQw
It is widely argued that speaking is a more manipulative form of communication rather than writing. Personally, I opine that both of these views are willing to bring several merits, primarily depending upon the situation to use which platform is more appropriate. On the one side, I believe that speaking is an extremely impactful way to communicate. To begin with, there are hardly any necessities of grammar in terms of normal speaking, which makes it faster and less challenging to understand other people’s ideas in order to avoid conflicts or confusions. This might be particularly beneficial for introductions or explanations when questions which constantly appeared will be answered immediately. Furthermore, verbal communications enable people to engender their emotions thanks to their various tones in their voice which can, for example, powerfully make parents at school understand their children's critical problems obviously rather than written informing paper by teachers. On the other side, the written form is also regarded as an efficient tool of communication. To start with in some form of places such as offices emails and documents are usually recorded in digital files which will be saved in storage. This explains why many announcements including invitations, cancellations or requests are usually kept in written form. Furthermore, with careful check in terms of grammar, people are allowed to multi-task in the way that they can maintain separate conversations, for example, with their friends, managers or parents. This is particularly favourable to school, working areas or especially multinational companies since people nowadays have different time frames to gain their efficiency. To sum up, both speaking and writing modes of communication do show their own benefits and I am convinced that people have to carefully decide what form to do in many specific situations.
It is
widely
argued that speaking is a more manipulative
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form
of
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communication
rather
than writing.
Personally
, I opine that both of these views are willing to bring several merits,
primarily
depending upon the situation to
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use
which platform is more appropriate.

On the one side, I believe that speaking is an
extremely
impactful way to communicate. To
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begin
with, there are hardly any necessities of grammar in terms of normal speaking, which
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makes
it faster and less challenging to understand other
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people’s
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ideas
in order to avoid conflicts or confusions. This might be
particularly
beneficial for introductions or explanations when questions which
constantly
appeared will
be answered
immediately.
Furthermore
, verbal communications enable
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people
to engender their emotions thanks to their various tones in their voice which can,
for example
,
powerfully
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make
parents at school understand their children's critical problems
obviously
rather
than written informing paper by teachers.

On the other side, the written
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form
is
also
regarded as an efficient tool of
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communication
. To
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start
with in
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some
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form
of places such as offices emails and documents are
usually
recorded in digital files which will
be saved
in storage. This
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explains
why
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many
announcements including invitations, cancellations or requests are
usually
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kept
in written
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form
.
Furthermore
, with careful
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check
in terms of grammar,
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people
are
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allowed
to multi-task in the way that they can maintain separate conversations,
for example
, with their friends, managers or parents. This is
particularly
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favourable
to school, working areas or
especially
multinational
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companies
since
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people
nowadays have
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different
time frames to gain their efficiency.

To sum up, both speaking and writing modes of
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communication
do
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show
their
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own
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benefits and
I
am convinced
that
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people
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have to
carefully
decide what
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form
to do in
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many
specific situations.

IELTS essay Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
292 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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