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Speaking Part 3Answer these questions related to finding things: Collecting things as a hobby1. What kind of things do people like collecting as a hobby? 2. What educational benefit do you think collecting objects like coins or stamps might have? Archaeology1 v.1

Speaking Part 3Answer these questions related to finding things: Collecting things as a hobby1. What kind of things do people like collecting as a hobby? 2. What educational benefit do you think collecting objects like coins or stamps might have? Archaeology1 v. 1
A lot of people want to construct their house or office the way it describes them while others think that government should regulate the plan of construction of new houses or offices in big cities. Although state can apply some policies that newly constructed building should adhere, they can’t completely control the layout component of it. In this essay, we’ll be discussing both of these views that whether a ministry should regulate the newly constructed buildings or not. However, I agree with the latter one where they can’t regulate the design part which is the dream of the person who is financing it. Regime can put some policies in order to regulate the method of the newly constructed buildings. These policies are required because initially big cities were designed to sustain a very less number of people rather than which they are accommodating now which in turn leads to the consumption of more resources. For example, Bangalore was designed to accommodate 1 million people, but now it’s accommodating around seventy to eight hundred thousand, which is seven times the original number which it’s infrastructure was supposed to sustain. We live in a democracy where regime can’t control our right to dream. People have a dream to own a house in the locality of their choice, so as long as the person buy or lease a land of their choice. Of course ministry can put some policies which are good for the environment. For example, water harvesting, solar panel etc. That a person can adhere because he knows that’s the functional part of the design, not the non functional section. People are attached to the non functional component of the layout so the state shouldn’t be interfering with the non functional sector of the model. In Conclusion, People should have aspirations and if they have the means to sustain those aspirations like building a house and regime shouldn’t regulate those parts.
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want to construct their
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house
or office the way it
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describes
them while others
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think
that
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government
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regulate
the plan of construction of new
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houses
or offices in
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big
cities.

Although state can apply
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some
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policies
that
newly
constructed
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building
should adhere, they can’t completely control the layout component of it. In this essay, we’ll be discussing both of these views that whether a ministry should
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regulate
the
newly
constructed
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buildings
or not.
However
, I
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agree
with the latter one where they can’t
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regulate
the design part which is the dream of the person who is financing it.

Regime can put
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some
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policies
in order to
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regulate
the method of the
newly
constructed
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buildings
. These
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policies
are required
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because
initially
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big
cities
were designed
to sustain a
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less number of
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people
rather
than which they are accommodating
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now
which in turn leads to the consumption of more resources.
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, Bangalore
was designed
to accommodate 1 million
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people
,
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but
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now
it’s accommodating around seventy to eight hundred thousand, which is seven times the original number which it’s infrastructure
was supposed
to sustain.

We
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live
in a democracy where regime can’t control our right to dream.
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People
have a dream to
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own
a
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house
in the locality of their choice,
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so
as long as the person
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buy
or lease a land of their choice.
Of course
ministry can put
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some
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policies
which are
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good
for the environment.
For example
, water harvesting, solar panel etc. That a person can adhere
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because
he knows that’s the
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functional
part of the design, not the non
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functional
section.
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People
are attached
to the non
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functional
component of the layout
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so
the state shouldn’t be interfering with the non
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functional
sector of the model.

In Conclusion
,
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People
should have aspirations and if they have the means to sustain those aspirations like
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building
a
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house
and regime shouldn’t
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regulate
those parts.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Speaking Part 3Answer these questions related to finding things: Collecting things as a hobby1. What kind of things do people like collecting as a hobby? 2. What educational benefit do you think collecting objects like coins or stamps might have? Archaeology1 v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
320 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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