Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Sorry, we can't provide precise band score for this text right now. (Seems it's more than 6.5) We are working to fix this. Stay tuned

Sorry, we can't provide precise band score for this text right now. (Seems it's more than 6. 5) We are working to fix this. Stay tuned 2lRqk

It is the fact that everything must change. People generally resist making changes in their lives, although it could cause many problems. This essay will discuss such problems, and suggest some solution for them. It is accepted that living our lives without changing is easy and comfortable. For example, nobody would change his or her job to a new one that is not familiar. But staying the same forever sometimes prevents us from discovering new experiences, friends and better chances. Consequently, we may not have development in many aspects. If no development happens, the chance to be out-of-date is possible because the world keeps changing every minute. In my opinion, a good idea to make us accept the change is making the inspiration happen. Inspiration is believed to be a factor that makes people brave enough to change for anything better. Another way is to accept the change little by little. By doing this, ourselves can adapt to something new easily. For example, when I wanted to wake up early at 6. 00 am instead of 8. 00 am as I used to do, I set my alarm clock to wake me up at 7. 30 am, 7. 00 am, 6. 30 am and 6. 00 am on the 1st, 2nd, 3rd and 4th day, respectively. On the 4th day, I woke up at 6. 00 am without sleepy feeling. In conclusion, resisting any changes in our lives is such a barrier that prevents us from better chances. The possible solutions are to make inspiration happen and adapt ourselves to change little by little.

It is the fact that everything This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
change
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
generally
 resist making You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
changes
 in their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
, although it could cause This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 problems. This essay will discuss such problems, and suggest This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 solution for them.

It is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
accepted
 that living our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 without changing is easy and comfortable. For example
, nobody would You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
change
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:their
his or her
 job to a new one that is
 not familiar. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 staying the same forever This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :precludes
prevents
 us from discovering new experiences, friends and better chances. Consequently
, we may not have development in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 aspects. If no development happens, the chance to be out-of-date is possible This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the world This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retains
keeps
 changing every minute.

In my opinion, a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 us accept the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
change
 is making the inspiration happen. Inspiration is believed
 to be a factor that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 brave This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
change
 for anything better. Another way is to accept the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
change
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withscantinsufficientslightmeagerlimited
little
 by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withscantinsufficientslightmeagerlimited
little
. By doing this, ourselves can adapt to something new easily
. For example
, when I wanted to wake up early at 6. 00 am instead
 of 8. 00 am as I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to do, I set my alarm clock to wake me up at 7. 30 am, 7. 00 am, 6. 30 am and 6. 00 am on the 1st, 2nd, 3rd and 4th day, respectively
. On the 4th day, I woke up at 6. 00 am without sleepy feeling.

In conclusion
, resisting any You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
changes
 in our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 is such a barrier that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :precludes
prevents
 us from better chances. The possible solutions are to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 inspiration happen and adapt ourselves to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
change
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withscantinsufficientslightmeagerlimited
little
 by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withscantinsufficientslightmeagerlimited
little
. 