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Do you work or study do you like food do you like flowers do you like singing do you like reading books

Do you work or study do you like food do you like flowers do you like singing do you like reading books YgwVr
Well I am still student I'm not working and I'm preparing for my further study in abroad. Of course I like food because I am a food lover and my favourite food is Punjabi cuisines and apart from that I also like Chinese or Thai cuisine but also I my favourite is Punjabi cuisine so I like food very much apart from that I love flowers because it is a beautiful creation of God and flowers are found all the part of our India and part of whole country got it is this was our very beautiful and very attractive not it beautiful but also flowers has a amazing fragrance and everyone has attractive to work it moreover I like singing because I feel it relax my mind and my soul I am not a perfect singer but I am also a bathroom singer and if I got a chance to showcase my talent I always do this because I love singing and I listening music according to my situation and my time however I like reading books it is my childhood talent when I am in school I always read story books because I feel it and it is a best source for entertainment and leisure activity so that why reading books a lot when I feel free in my life
Well I am
still
student I'm not working and I'm preparing for my
further
study in abroad.
Of course
I like
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food
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because
I am a
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food
lover and my
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favourite
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food
is Punjabi cuisines and apart from that I
also
like Chinese or Thai cuisine
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but
also
I my
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favourite
is Punjabi cuisine
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so
I like
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food
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very
much apart from that I
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love
flowers
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because
it is a
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beautiful
creation of God and flowers
are found
all the part of our India and part of whole country
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got
it is this was our
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very
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beautiful
and
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very
attractive not
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it
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beautiful
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but
also
flowers has
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a
amazing fragrance and everyone has attractive to work it
moreover
I like singing
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because
I feel it relax my mind and my soul I am not a perfect singer
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but
I am
also
a bathroom singer and if I
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got
a chance to showcase my talent I always do this
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because
I
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love
singing and
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I listening
music according to my situation and my time
however
I like reading books it is my childhood talent when I am in school I always read story books
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because
I feel it and it is
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a
best source for entertainment and leisure activity
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so
that why reading books a lot when I feel free in my
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life

IELTS essay Do you work or study do you like food do you like flowers do you like singing do you like reading books

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
221 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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