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Sone people say to best way to control pollution is to increase fuel price . What extent you agree with this statement ?

Sone people say to best way to control pollution is to increase fuel price. What extent you agree with this statement? aEoRV
Now days pollution is the serious global problem. Many masses notion that to control pollution it’s a best decision to increase fuel prices. I do not agree with the statement and I believe there are other factor which is required to implement to control air pollution. To embark with, it is undeniable fact that pollution has become the grave challenge for world. There are numerous step government can take to prevent its causes. Firstly they have to focus on forest development, it is a need to build artificial forest to rid from air related problem moreover these step will be beneficial for our ecosystem, trees use to observe carbon emission from the atmosphere. Secondly authorities should promote electric Vehicle rather then fuel consuming vehicle. For instance, In US around 3 billion vehicle are on the road which create almost 40 percent of air pollution however, after the implementation of electric concept now approximately 10% of air quality has improved in some big cities in US. Which is really a positive indication On the flip side, government agencies can not increase the fuel prices because which directly lead to inflation. Owing to this it can badly impact on local people and market. Thus Legislator should work on others solution which will be positive for individuals and government in a long run To conclude, pollution is the serious concern and law makers and rulers must work on its solution however, price hiking of fuels is not a long lasting solution
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days
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pollution
is the serious global problem.
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masses
notion that to control
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pollution
it’s
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a
best decision to increase
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fuel
prices. I do not
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agree
with the statement and I believe there are other
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factor
which
is required
to implement to control
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air
pollution.

To embark with, it is undeniable fact that
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pollution
has become the grave challenge for world. There are numerous step
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government
can take to
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prevent
its causes.
Firstly
they
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have to
focus on forest development, it is a need to build artificial forest to
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rid from
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air
related problem
moreover
these step will be beneficial for our ecosystem, trees
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use to
observe carbon emission from the atmosphere.
Secondly
authorities should promote electric Vehicle
rather
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then
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fuel
consuming vehicle.
For instance
, In US around 3 billion
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vehicle
are on the road which create almost 40 percent of
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air
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pollution
however
, after the implementation of electric concept
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now
approximately 10% of
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air
quality has
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improved
in
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some
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big
cities in US. Which is
really
a
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positive
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indication


On the flip side,
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government
agencies can not increase the
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fuel
prices
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because
which
directly
lead to inflation. Owing to this it can
badly
impact on local
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people
and market.
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Thus
Legislator should work on
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others
solution which will be
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positive
for individuals and
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government
in a long
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run


To conclude
,
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pollution
is the serious concern and law makers and rulers
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must
work on its solution
however
, price hiking of
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fuels
is not a
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long lasting
solution
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IELTS essay Sone people say to best way to control pollution is to increase fuel price. What extent you agree with this statement?

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