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comparing 3 images of west park school in 1950,1980 and 2010

comparing 3 images of west park school in 1950, 1980 and 2010 bE5AY
The three images elucidates the structural changes taken place at wesk park secondary school in three different years: 1950, 1980 and 2010. overall, the main road and school remains unchanged and remaining areas are being change for every 30 years accordingly. The place allocated for houses in 1950 was converted to car parking and science block in 1980 and the area used for farm land is turned to sports field. while in 2010 even the sports field was also occupied by car parking. In 2010, the some part of playground is allocated to sports field
The three images elucidates the structural
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changes
taken place at
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wesk
park secondary school in three
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different
years: 1950, 1980 and 2010.
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overall
, the main road and school remains unchanged and remaining areas are being
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change
for every 30 years
accordingly
. The place allocated for
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houses
in 1950
was converted
to car parking and science block in 1980 and the area
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used
for farm land
is turned
to
The verb after "to" should be in the base form: "sport".
sports
field.
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while
in 2010 even the sports field was
also
occupied by car parking. In 2010, the
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some
part of playground
is allocated
to
The verb after "to" should be in the base form: "sport".
sports
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field

IELTS essay comparing 3 images of west park school in 1950, 1980 and 2010

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