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Son has more advantages and disadvantages

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Without doubt I can say son is very important when it can be used a lot of importance in coming for our favourite discuss about the portance of the sun even the advantages more than drawbacks. First and foremost that one days of the sun a lot of energy is from differences it is the nearest star on earth the lot of benefits from SAM first and foremost help the person who is suffering from different diseases like vitamins problem can be solved by standing on with your son of morning rays secondly the fruits and vegetables was also divided by the sun by the rays of sun rise which gives energy also for instance if a person who without having food On other hand there are one drawback about the sun in the summer season there is a lot of heat which produces from the sun and the humans of below age and age can be easily get suffer from fever secondly this is one of the most different part of life example if sun produce high heat then the person can easily admit in hospital without any doubt finally the ozone layer of the sun is also a produces two or three layers which can we decrease because of heat and the people in the heat also increases the same period. To sum up I penned down I would like to repeat that there are lot of advantages more than the drawbacks
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can say son is
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important
when it can be
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used
a
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lot
of importance in coming for our
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favourite
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discuss about the
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portance
of the
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sun
even the advantages more than drawbacks.

First
and foremost that
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one days
of the
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sun
a
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lot
of energy is from differences it is the nearest star on earth the
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lot
of benefits from SAM
first
and foremost
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help
the person who is suffering from
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different
diseases like
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vitamins
problem can
be solved
by standing on with your son of morning rays
secondly
the fruits and vegetables was
also
divided by the
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sun
by the rays of
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sun
rise which gives energy
also
for instance
if a person who without having food

On other hand there are one drawback about the
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sun
in
Consider using "summer".
the summer season
there is a
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lot
of
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heat
which produces from the
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sun
and the humans of below age and age can be
easily
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get
suffer from fever
secondly
this is one of the most
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different
part of life example if
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sun
produce high
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heat
then the person can
easily
admit in hospital without any doubt
finally
the ozone layer of the
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sun
is
also
a produces two or three layers which can we decrease
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because
of
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heat
and the
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people
in the
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heat
also
increases the same period.

To sum up I penned down I would like to repeat that there are
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lot
of advantages more than the drawbacks
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IELTS essay Son has more advantages and disadvantages

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
243 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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