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Sometimes people take time to plan their free time activities in advance other times do not make any plans whatsoever for their pleasure time and they do that ever sounds good at that time.

Sometimes people take time to plan their free time activities in advance other times do not make any plans whatsoever for their pleasure time and they do that ever sounds good at that time. A92l
In this days more and more people trying to control their free time. Making plans sometimes can help for a person to be more ambitious. However I advocate to do not make a plan for pleasure time. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain reasons for the same. Primarily, if a person makes a plan, it links to achieve this no matter what and it is makes confident and improve self esteem when you have done what you had planned. In addition you will have less opportunity to procrastinate and this way leads to be more punctual. When you wrote down you will be able to have what to do next. If you have pasion to make a plan for your pastime, it would be good idea to conduct your self. In contrast, some people diseases to make a plan pleasure time, since they think it is boring to follow what you have known before. Moreover, when a person does not write a plan can forget important things. If some one had written a plan, it would have been easy to remember. Furthermore, , without drowing a plan you become spontaneously. For example, after waking up in the morning you might have an idea to drive to beach after stressful weekdays. If you want to live as a person planning your free time is not significant. In conclusion, I firmly agree that drawing a plan for our pastime makes us as a robot. Also, if we know wthat to do beforehand, it would be boring and stressful. Whereas others continue to believe that planning is vital for humans.
In
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this days
more and more
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people
trying to control their free
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time
. Making
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plans
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sometimes
can
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help
for a
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person
to be more ambitious.
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However
I advocate to do not
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make
a
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plan
for pleasure
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time
. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall
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explain
reasons for the same.
Primarily
, if a
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person
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makes
a
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plan
, it links to achieve this no matter what and it is
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makes
confident and
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improve
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self esteem
when you have done what you had planned. In
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will have less opportunity to procrastinate and this way leads to be more punctual.
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When
you wrote down you will be able to have what to do
next
. If you have
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pasion
to
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make
a
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plan
for your pastime, it would be
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good
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idea
to conduct your self.
In contrast
,
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some
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people
diseases to
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make
a
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plan
pleasure
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time
, since they
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think
it is boring to follow what you have known
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before
.
Moreover
, when a
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person
does not write a
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plan
can forget
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important
things. If
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some one
had written a
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plan
, it would have been easy to remember.
Furthermore
,
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,
without
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drowing
a
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plan
you become
spontaneously
.
For example
, after waking up in the morning you might have an
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idea
to drive to beach after stressful weekdays.
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
you want to
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live
as a
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person
planning your free
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time
is not significant.
In conclusion
, I
firmly
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agree
that drawing a
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plan
for our pastime
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makes
us as a robot.
Also
, if we know
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wthat
to do beforehand, it would be boring and stressful. Whereas others continue to believe that planning is vital for humans.
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IELTS essay Sometimes people take time to plan their free time activities in advance other times do not make any plans whatsoever for their pleasure time and they do that ever sounds good at that time.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
268 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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