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Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. Give your opinion v.1

Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. Give your opinion v. 1
Truth builds character, however, some argue that it should be avoided occasionally to gain personal interests, and to avoid some unnecessary situations. This essay will discuss why people think so-and that why truth is non-debatable in any circumstance. A primary reason to lie on specific occasions, according to a group of people, is to avoid disastrous outcomes; to save two countries from a war, to save a relationship, to avoid losing a job, and many more. Similarly, to forge strong bonds, they think, it is an absolute imperative to employ a certain level of diplomacy. Evidently, many countries base their foreign policies on lies to avoid offending their neighbours. However, a lie is a lie-and has no legs, and is destined to be revealed someday. Remaining true to your words, on the other hand, in difficult and grim situations earns credibility; people give more value to your opinions and show unwavering faith in what you say. A famous scholar once said "Speak the truth even if your voice is shaking". No wonder the biographies of all the great men and women reveal one common trait ingrained in their personalities; truth. In addition to this, one should avoid lying because once someone lies, he is more likely to lie again in order to hide that lie, and the cycle goes on and on, and ultimately it becomes a habit. So, one should always seek the truth no matter what life throws at him. To conclude, this essay discussed how humans can achieve temporary goals with getting their ways around and how they can solve some problems temporarily with it but bonds built on lies and solutions based on untrue facts are doomed to bring catastrophic results in the long run by destroying one's reputation. I personally think that everybody should remain true to their words whatever the situation is.
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some
argue that it should
be avoided
occasionally
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avoid
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some
unnecessary situations. This essay will discuss why
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people
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think
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so
-and that why
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truth
is non-debatable in any circumstance.

A primary reason to
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lie
on specific occasions, according to a group of
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people
, is to
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avoid
disastrous outcomes; to save two countries from a war, to save a relationship, to
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avoid
losing a job, and
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many
more.
Similarly
, to forge strong bonds, they
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think
, it is an absolute imperative to employ a certain level of diplomacy.
Evidently
,
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many
countries base their foreign policies on lies to
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avoid
offending their
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neighbours
.
However
, a
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lie
is a lie-and has no legs, and
is destined
to
be revealed
someday.

Remaining true to your
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words
,
on the other hand
, in difficult and grim situations earns credibility;
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people
give more value to your opinions and
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show
unwavering faith in what you say. A
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famous
scholar once said
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Speak the
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truth
even if your voice is shaking
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. No wonder the biographies of all the great
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men
and women reveal one common trait ingrained in their personalities;
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truth
.
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to this, one should
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avoid
lying
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because
once someone lies, he is more likely to
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lie
again in order to
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hide
that
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lie
, and the cycle goes on and on, and
ultimately
it becomes a habit.
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So
, one should always seek the
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truth
no matter what life throws at him.

To conclude
, this essay discussed how humans can achieve temporary goals with getting their ways around and how they can solve
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some
problems
temporarily
with it
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but
bonds built on lies and solutions based on untrue facts
are doomed
to bring catastrophic results in the long run by destroying one's reputation. I
personally
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think
that everybody should remain true to their
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words
whatever the situation is.
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IELTS essay Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. Give your opinion v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
308 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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