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The Hight Volume of Traffic

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problems
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population
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increased in much more rapid compared to last years. The
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traffic
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problems
include of
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various aspect, such as lack of
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transportation
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problems
can
be solved
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by involving
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different
types of fields and experts.

The main
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of
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traffic
stems from population rates
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specifally
it affects to the
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big
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İstanbul
is housing fifteen and a half million of p
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obvious that these numbers give rises to
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traffic
congestions e
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infrastructure. H
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the solution depends on these main problems.

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and building a
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traffic
system within last technological
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improvments
have been fundamental for b
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cities without
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invest not o
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networks b
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to analyze
through computer experts
instantly
thanks to this approach g
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have c
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of quick actions to troubles. I
n addition,
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investions
for effective decisions.

In conclude, the
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traffic
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problems
are going up day by day. It is a c
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that solutions depends on cooperation of the various fields. M
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new
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traffic
system
is designed
by last technological innovations s
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that it could be s
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helpful with great impact on
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problems
.
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IELTS essay The Hight Volume of Traffic

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
251 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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