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The effect of unemployment on society

The effect of unemployment on society RRDGV
Unemployment is the worst issue in the world and it has a lot of effects on society. First of all it can increase stress and anxiety, poverty, violence in home with family or people in society, loose confidents and self steam, be sick because of cost of medicine and treatment, increasing divorce, homeless, corruption and depravity, addiction, theft, burglary, homicide. Unemployment is the worst issue in the world and it has a lot of effects on society. First of all it can increase stress and anxiety, poverty, violence in home with family or people in society, loose confidents and self steam, be sick because of cost of medicine and treatment, increasing divorce, homeless, corruption and depravity, addiction, theft, burglary, homicide.
Unemployment is the worst issue in the world and it has
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of cost of medicine and treatment, increasing divorce, homeless, corruption and depravity, addiction, theft, burglary, homicide. Unemployment is the worst issue in the world and it has
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a lot of
effects on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
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First of all
it can increase
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
and anxiety, poverty, violence in home with family or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
, loose
Possible spelling mistake found.
confidents
and self steam, be sick
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because
of cost of medicine and treatment, increasing divorce, homeless, corruption and depravity, addiction, theft, burglary, homicide.
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IELTS essay The effect of unemployment on society

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
120 words
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