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Sometimes a country feels like they must choose between protecting the environment and encouraging economic development. What is your opinion on the matter?

Sometimes a country feels like they must choose between protecting the environment and encouraging economic development. What is your opinion on the matter? J3gMk
It would seem that at times government has to make a choice between economy and environment. That is the difficult dilemma and hard to chose one as both of them implies important. This is the complex issue. In my opinion, environmental progress is much vital than any other political or economical situation. In the first place, surroundings have the biggest impact on our life. We can say, it is the head of the chain and we are the hand of that. Which means human society unconsciously connected to the nature. If it works wrongly, the earth population can’t make it better with just a single action or continue to bloom other fields of life. On the other hand, financially progress makes people’s way of life much comfortable and easier. Plus to this, it helps to encourage different social life, for example, medicine, art, education, agriculture and etc. However, health of human beings is the number one aspect of everybody’s ambition. In conclusion, the Earth is the only place humans live and we must protect it. Only a little negligence may cause unexpected disaster that leads to start everything from the beginning.
It would seem that at times
government
has to
make
a choice between economy and environment.
That is
the difficult dilemma and
hard
to chose one as both of them implies
important
. This is the complex issue. In my opinion, environmental progress is much
vital
than any other political or
economical
situation. In the
first
place, surroundings have the biggest impact on our
life
. We can say, it is the head of the
chain and
we are the hand of that.
Which
means human society
unconsciously
connected to the nature. If it works
wrongly
, the earth population can’t
make
it better with
just
a single action or continue to bloom other fields of
life
.
On the other hand
,
financially
progress
makes
people
’s way of
life
much comfortable and easier. Plus to this, it
helps
to encourage
different
social
life
,
for example
, medicine, art, education, agriculture
and etc
.
However
, health of human beings is the number one aspect of everybody’s ambition.
In conclusion
, the Earth is the
only
place humans
live and
we
must
protect it.
Only
a
little
negligence may cause unexpected disaster that leads to
start
everything from the beginning.
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IELTS essay Sometimes a country feels like they must choose between protecting the environment and encouraging economic development. What is your opinion on the matter?

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