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Something that is essential to me

Something that is essential to me brlkQ
I can't live without my phone. I usually stay at my house in my free time and watch movies or series with my phone and I occasionally hang out with my friends. I spend a lot of time with my phone by using social networking apps like Facebook, Twitter and watch videos with Youtube. I discovered my new hobby recently which is reading. I download lots of E-book and read with my phone. I also started to study English about two months ago so I spent a much longer time using my phone. I am writing an essay or report at writeandimprove. com on my phone every day to improve my writing skills. I download English courses such as vocabulary, grammar and study those on my phone as well. Since I don't have a laptop I have to do all the things on my phone. I don't think I can do these things without my phone. I need to keep in touch with my friends on social apps with my phone. The reason my phone became more necessary than ever is that I can't go out during the Covid-19 pandemic.
I can't
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live
without my
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phone
. I
usually
stay at my
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house
in my free time and
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watch
movies or series with my
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phone
and I
occasionally
hang out with my friends.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
spend
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a lot of
time with my
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phone
by using social networking apps like Facebook, Twitter and
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watch
videos with
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Youtube
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
discovered my new hobby recently which is reading.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
download
Possible agreement error. The noun E-book seems to be countable; consider using: "lots of e-books".
lots of E-book
and read with my
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phone
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
also
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started
to study English about two months ago
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so
I spent a much longer time using my
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phone
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am writing an essay or report at
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writeandimprove
.
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com
on my
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phone
every day to
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improve
my writing
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skills
. I download English courses such as vocabulary, grammar and study those on my
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phone
as well
.
“Since” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since
I don't have a laptop I
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have to
do all the things on my
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phone
. I don't
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think
I can do these things without my
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phone
. I need to
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keep
in touch with my friends on social apps with my
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phone
. The reason my
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phone
became more necessary than ever is that I can't go out during the Covid-19 pandemic.

IELTS essay Something that is essential to me

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
190 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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