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Peope are unable to manage their balance of life . What are the reasons and soultion

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Without any qualms, technology has led tremendous transformations at every nook and corner, human are indulged themselves in divergent professional activities at present scenario which is prime cause of unbalance of human's life. This essay will deliberate not only the pertinent reasons but also remedial measurements. The prime reasons behind it is, longer hours of work because either for acquiring materialistic things or maintaining lavish lifestyle people opt to atempt working activities which lead weaker bond among the family members. To cite an example, the latest renowned reaserch has concluded, in recognised nation the divorce date is proliferating owing to busy schedule of masses. Consequently, neither human time to utilise their family nor
Without any qualms, technology has led tremendous transformations at every nook and corner, human
are indulged
themselves in divergent professional activities at present scenario which is prime cause of unbalance of human's life. This essay will deliberate not
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only
the pertinent reasons
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but
also
remedial measurements. The prime reasons behind it is, longer hours of work
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because
either for acquiring materialistic things or maintaining lavish lifestyle
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people
opt to
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atempt
working activities which lead weaker bond among the family members. To cite an example, the latest renowned
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reaserch
has concluded, in
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recognised
nation the divorce date is proliferating owing to busy schedule of masses.
Consequently
, neither human time to
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utilise
their family nor
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IELTS essay Peope are unable to manage their balance of life. What are the reasons and soultion

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