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People should spend more time outdoors

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People should discover what is happening in the world. A lot of adventurers are now exploring different parts of the world by travel to other countries, and cultures as well. Many directors who are fond of wildlife create content for instance the discovery of the Atlantic ocean trying to find out what is going on in the ocean, the sea creatures which have not been seen frequently. Nowadays, people are interested in outdoor activities like hiking, camping, fishing. They can relax and have fun with their families during their holidays by going camping if you are near the river or lake you can enjoy fishing too. Hiking is one of the best outdoor activities to keep you fit. It helps you to concentrate on what you are doing and relieve stress. Unless you like hiking, You can also do exercises in the park. We need to do exercise for at least thirty minutes every day to keep fit and healthy. However, during the Covid-19 pandemic, we can't do outdoor activities sadly and have to stay at home. I hope things will get better shortly.
People
should discover what is happening in the world.
A lot of
adventurers are
now
exploring
different
parts of the world by travel to other countries, and cultures
as well
.
Many
directors who are fond of wildlife create content
for instance
the discovery of the
Atlantic ocean
trying to find out what is going on in the ocean, the sea creatures which have not been
seen
frequently
. Nowadays,
people
are interested
in outdoor activities like hiking, camping, fishing. They can relax and have fun with their families during their holidays by going camping if you are near the river or lake you can enjoy fishing too. Hiking is one of the best outdoor activities to
keep
you fit. It
helps
you to concentrate on what you are doing and relieve
stress
. Unless you like hiking, You can
also
do exercises in the park. We need to do exercise for at least thirty minutes every day to
keep
fit and healthy.
However
, during the Covid-19 pandemic, we can't do outdoor activities
sadly
and
have to
stay at home. I hope things will
get
better shortly.
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IELTS essay People should spend more time outdoors

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
184 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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