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someone heared a Noise of dog and complaints about it

someone heared a Noise of dog and complaints about it 6xKnl
Around 8: 50pm, resident from Suite #415 informed the writer that there is noise coming in her Suite because someone's dog is barking on third or fifth floor. After that, writer conducted patrol on third and fifth floor but writer did not hear anything. Then, writer visited fourth floor and knocked the door of Suite #415 to ask that if noise is still coming in her Suite. Then, she informed the writer that noise is not coming now. No further action has been taken. This is just for your information.
Around 8: 50pm, resident from
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#415 informed the
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writer
that there is noise coming in her
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because
someone's dog is barking on third or fifth floor. After that,
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conducted patrol on third and fifth floor
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but
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did not hear anything. Then,
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visited fourth floor and knocked the door of
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#415 to ask that if noise is
still
coming in her
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. Then, she informed the
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that noise is not coming
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IELTS essay someone heared a Noise of dog and complaints about it

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
90 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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