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Is it necessary to spend a lot of money to make a good movie? What factors contribute to the success of a movie?

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IELTS essay Is it necessary to spend a lot of money to make a good movie? What factors contribute to the success of a movie?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
144 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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