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what kind of books do you like? what is your favourite book? what is it about? when did you get it? why do you like it?

what kind of books do you like? what is your favourite book? what is it about? when did you get it? why do you like it? 9LBnj
My favourite book is Jane Eyre. It is a novel by English writer Charlotte Bronte. The novel starts with Jane as a small kid living with her cousins and her aunt who was insanely intolerable. But then Jane was brought up by the maid of the house who used to talk to her considering her as a human and also a small child. Soon she was sent to some far away for education.
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IELTS essay what kind of books do you like? what is your favourite book? what is it about? when did you get it? why do you like it?

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73 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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