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Some people say that there is less communication between family members today than there was in the past

Some people say that there is less communication between family members today than there was in the past n6xJE

They spend valuable time on the use of electronic devices such as telephones, laptops, television, games like PS4 and so on, also activities on social media has also forced people to be addicted and confined people to their homes, thereby reducing verbal communication with families and this also limit their visitation

They spend valuable time on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of electronic devices such as telephones, laptops, television, games like PS4 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 on, also
 activities on social media has also
 forced This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to be addicted
 and confined This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to their homes, thereby reducing verbal communication with families and this also
 limit their visitation