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Spending on railways or the public transport system discuss both vies and give opinion

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Spending money on railways or the public transport system is becoming increasingly popular in some countries. While some individuals think it is indispensable to spend money on rail boards to link two urban areas, others opine to spend on developing the current public transport system. In my perspective, I am in unison with the latter view, and the reasons for my stand is explicated in ensuring paragraphs.

Spending money on railways or the public transport system is becoming increasingly
 popular in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 countries. While This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 individuals This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it is indispensable to spend money on rail boards to link two urban areas, others opine to spend on developing the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 public transport system. In my perspective, I am in unison with the latter view, and the reasons for my stand is explicated
 in ensuring paragraphs. 

IELTS essay Spending on railways or the public transport system discuss both vies and give opinion

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

67 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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