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5. Do you like to eat a fried food? Why or why not

5. Do you like to eat a fried food? Why or why not E3qnD
It's the fat. In our attempt to eat well, we are told that the culprit in obesity and heart disease is our consumption of fats. But as a population, Americans have been cutting back on fats for decades (the Centers for Disease Control and other organizations have noted this over many long studies) with no decrease in either malady.
It's the
fat
. In our attempt to eat well, we are
told
that the culprit in obesity and heart disease is our consumption of fats.
But
as a population, Americans have been cutting back on fats for decades (the Centers for Disease Control and other organizations have noted this over
many
long studies) with no decrease in either malady.
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IELTS essay 5. Do you like to eat a fried food? Why or why not

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  American English
1 paragraphs
59 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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