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Advantages and disadvantages of having own business

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One big enticement for business ownership is reaping the bigger financial rewards. Successful business owners have the opportunity to make more money for the risks they take. A tax preparer who makesa bout $15 per hour knows the firm charges several hundred dollars for the service he provides. When employee feels his value is worth more than the pay scale, opening his own business begins to make a lot of sense. However, business owners tend to experience high levels of stress as well as health issues. Not having consistent paycheck means business owners always need to generate new sales and revenues. Owners often experience significant variations in monthly income and have potentially higher debt accumulation. Bigger businesses that have a higher monthly overhead mean the business owner is responsible for others livelihood, whic also adds to personal stress.
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IELTS essay Advantages and disadvantages of having own business

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138 words
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