Some young adults want to be independent ASAP while others prefer to live with family members as long as they can. v.1
Some young adults want to be independent ASAP while others prefer to live with family members as long as they can. v. 1
It is argued by some parents that day care centres give the best services for primary school children, whereas other working parents believed that other family members will be taken care of their child such as grandparents. In my opinion, I believe that grandparents play vital role in caring children.
On one hand, it is thought by some people that childcare centres give more care to the pre-school age child. This is only possible when parents who are working or having enough money to provide the day care centres. In other words, if parents at home or do not work mainly mothers who are important to raise child in order to make them better individuals. This all leads to children bright future by parents who are giving their 100 % in making child as a good person. For example, in western country, most of the parents are depending on childcare centres as they are living in a nuclear family.
On the other hand, grandparents have an important role in raising child where their parents do not have time for children because of working all day. To add this, it is happening as child belongs to a joint family, which can have great impacts on the child's future as well as education. As a result, children can develop various milestones as per their age and constantly under observation in grandparents, they also teach traditional values and behaving in such a manner which includes how to respect elderly.
Finally, In my opinion, grandparents have an influence on children's career as well as future. In India many families belong to a joint family, which have so many other people apart from a grandparent who are taking care of family children.
In conclusion, parents having a busy work day with these types of family, grandparents one who care the children in those old days and implementation some manners and behaviour pattern which is not having in single types of family and those parents depended to private care centres.
It
is argued
by
some
parents
that day
care
centres
give the best services for primary school
children
, whereas
other
working
parents
believed that
other
family
members will
be taken
care
of their
child
such as
grandparents
. In my opinion, I believe that
grandparents
play vital role in caring children.
On one hand, it is
thought
by
some
people
that childcare
centres
give more
care
to the
pre-school
age
child
. This is
only
possible when
parents
who
are working or having
enough
money to provide the day
care
centres
. In
other
words, if
parents
at home or do not work
mainly
mothers
who
are
important
to raise
child
in order to
make
them better individuals. This all leads to
children
bright future by
parents
who
are giving their 100 % in making
child
as a
good
person.
For example
, in western country, most of the
parents
are depending
on childcare
centres
as they are living in a nuclear family.
On the
other
hand,
grandparents
have an
important
role in raising
child
where their
parents
do not have time for
children
because
of working all day. To
add
this, it is happening as
child
belongs to a joint
family
, which can have great impacts on the child's future
as well
as education.
As a result
,
children
can develop various milestones as per their age and
constantly
under observation in
grandparents
, they
also
teach traditional values and behaving in such a manner which includes how to respect elderly.
Finally
, In my opinion,
grandparents
have an influence on children's career
as well
as future. In India
many
families
belong to a joint
family
, which have
so
many
other
people
apart from a
grandparent
who
are taking
care
of
family
children.
In conclusion
,
parents
having a busy work day with these types of
family
,
grandparents
one
who
care
the
children
in those
old
days and implementation
some
manners and
behaviour
pattern which is not having in single types of
family
and those
parents
depended
to private
care
centres
.
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