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some universities need to take classes on different subject whereas in some need to specialize on a single subject. which one do you prefer? v.1

some universities need to take classes on different subject whereas in some need to specialize on a single subject. which one do you prefer? v. 1
University is a place where students, researchers gather to acquire higher education. To cope up with whole world and to make an impact in the job sector as well as personal level, university education is a must. Some universities require students to take classes on different subject whereas in some need to specialize on a single subject. Though I am in an enigmatic situation about choosing one, still I definitely prefer specialization on a single subject and I have three definite reasons behind my agreement. In case of particular subject, well equipped teachers on that respected subject can give lessons to the students. It is very necessary for students to learn one topic in its depth to tackle obstacles in future life. With the course of specialization on a non-disputed subject teachers can produce and students can absorp ins and out of that subject. For example, one of my friend became a vascular specialist. This particular topic is only a part of cardiology. As, he consumed only about vascularity, therefore when he taught students, learners got enthusiastic about that subject. Thus teachers and students both are benefited from single subject. On the other hand, Students ease their way in job sector. Nowadays, every company asks for one worker who knows a particular topic in depth. Therefore, if a student knows well about a particular topic he can shows his charisma on that specific field. For example, in the field of public health there is lots of different topics like epidemiology, environmental health, biostatistics, community health etc. But whenever a company posts any job circular they specify experience or education in a specific field. So, those who have experience on a particular field comes in front that others. Lastly, if a university requires to take classes on a particular subject then, university can equip vast majority of educational material on that particular topic. Therefore, it makes easier for the students to get all the materials. When they get materials right the way they become more concentrated on study rather than searching for materials. For example in a Public health school library, there is a huge collection of books on that particular subject, which cannot be found in Public library. To sum up, I evidently prefer teaching single subject in universities to multiple subjects. Not only the teachers can give their whole knowledge and universities can equip with vast majority of materials but also students easily get employed. That' s why it is more convenient to study in a single subject.
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is a place where
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students
, researchers gather to acquire higher education. To cope up with whole world and to
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make
an impact in the job sector
as well
as personal level,
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university
education is a
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must
.
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universities
require
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students
to take classes on
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different
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subject
whereas in
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some
need to specialize on a
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single
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subject
. Though I am in an enigmatic situation about choosing one,
still
I definitely prefer specialization on a
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single
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subject
and I have three
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definite
reasons behind my agreement.

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particular
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subject
,
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well equipped
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teachers
on that respected
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subject
can give lessons to the
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students
. It is
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very
necessary for
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students
to learn one
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topic
in its depth to tackle obstacles in future life. With the course of specialization on a non-disputed
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subject
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teachers
can produce and
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students
can
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absorp
ins and out of that
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subject
.
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, one of my friend became a vascular specialist. This
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particular
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topic
is
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only
a part of cardiology. As, he consumed
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only
about
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vascularity
,
therefore
when he taught
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students
, learners
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got
enthusiastic about that
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subject
.
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teachers
and
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students
both
are benefited
from
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single
subject.

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,
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Students
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ease
their way in job sector. Nowadays, every
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company
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asks for
one worker who knows a
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particular
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topic
in depth.
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, if a
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student
knows well about a
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particular
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topic
he can
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shows
his charisma on that specific
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field
.
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, in the
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field
of public
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health
there is lots of
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different
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topics
like epidemiology, environmental
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health
, biostatistics, community
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health
etc.
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whenever a
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company
posts any job circular they specify experience or education in a specific
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field
.
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, those who have experience on a
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particular
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comes
in front that others.

Lastly
, if a
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university
requires
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to take
classes on a
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particular
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subject
then,
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university
can equip
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vast majority of
educational
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material
on that
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particular
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topic
.
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, it
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makes
easier for the
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students
to
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get
all the
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materials
. When they
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get
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materials
right the way they become more concentrated on study
rather
than searching for
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materials
.
For example
in a Public
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health
school library, there is a huge collection of books on that
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particular
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subject
, which cannot
be found
in Public library.

To sum up, I
evidently
prefer teaching
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single
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subject
in
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universities
to multiple
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subjects
. Not
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only
the
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teachers
can give their whole knowledge and
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universities
can equip with
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vast majority of
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materials
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but
also
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students
easily
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get
employed.
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67Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS essay some universities need to take classes on different subject whereas in some need to specialize on a single subject. which one do you prefer? v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
419 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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