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some universities deduct mark on a student's work if it is given late. what is your opinion? What alternative actions do you recommend to take v.1

some universities deduct mark on a student's work if it is given late. what is your opinion? What alternative actions do you recommend to take v. 1
Students are penalised for late submission of assignments at tertiary schools by the deduction of marks. In my opinion, this is very adequate approach to deal with the lazy students, however, alternative solutions do exist for this problem. The assignments in university education are integral part of the training of students. These assignments are meant not only to improve the research and knowledge skills of students, but also to make students disciplined so that they submit their task before due date. However, few lazy students deliberately delay their assignments till the last date and some unforeseen happens which results in their failure to complete at the last night. These students should be penalised by deduction of marks from their final grades or they will become habitual. Consequently, they have been observed to continue the same practices when they enter practical life which may cost their employers or companies' fortunes. At that stage, it is pretty tough task to improve the habits which have been inculcated in them for years. Besides, reward and punishments are important keys in every aspect of life, reward for good work and punishment for mistakes. Several other alternatives can be adopted by the teachers to force students to deposit their assignments in time. In case of late submission, the students may be given one extra assignment as punishment which may scare them in future. Another possible strategy could be if the students are retained in university on the last day of submission and not allowed to go till the time they deposit it. This can be very practical solution as university libraries are kept open till late night. These students can complete the assignment at the library and leave when they deposit it. In conclusion, marks deduction is the easiest solution for making the university students disciplined in depositing their task. This is an important step as these students will be important decision makers in the future.
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Students
are
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penalised
for late submission of
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assignments
at tertiary schools by the deduction of marks. In my opinion, this is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
adequate approach to deal with the lazy
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students
,
however
, alternative solutions do exist for this problem.

The
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assignments
in
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university
education are integral part of the training of
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students
. These
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assignments
are meant
not
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only
to
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improve
the research and knowledge
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skills
of
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students
,
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but
also
to
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make
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students
disciplined
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so
that they submit their task
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before
due date.
However
, few lazy
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students
deliberately
delay their
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assignments
till the last date and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
unforeseen happens which results in their failure to complete at the last night. These
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students
should be
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penalised
by deduction of marks from their final
Use a comma before 'or' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
grades or
they will become habitual.
Consequently
, they have
been observed
to continue the same practices when they enter practical life which may cost their employers or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
' fortunes. At that stage, it is pretty tough task to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
the habits which have
been inculcated
in them for years.
Besides
, reward and punishments are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
keys in every aspect of life, reward for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
work and punishment for mistakes.

Several other alternatives can
be adopted
by the teachers to force
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
to deposit their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
assignments
in time. In case of late submission, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
may be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
one extra
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assignment
as punishment which may scare them
Did you mean: "in the future"?
in future
. Another possible strategy could be if the
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students
are retained
in
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university
on the last day of submission and not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
allowed
to go till the time they deposit it. This can be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
practical solution as
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university
libraries are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
open till late night. These
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students
can complete the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
assignment
at the library and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
when they deposit it.

In conclusion
, marks deduction is the easiest solution for making the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
disciplined in depositing their task. This is an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
step as these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
will be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
decision makers in the future.
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IELTS essay some universities deduct mark on a student's work if it is given late. what is your opinion? What alternative actions do you recommend to take v. 1

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