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Some think the current generation should take steps to protect the environment for the next generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Environment plays a key role in social well-being. History is evident, as to how exploitative capitalism has compromised our lives, affecting natural resources. In order to acquire unlimited growth, they are jeopardizing our well-being. Personally, I am supporting the idea of many environmentalists, who are triggering our attention towards restoration of our habitats that eventually give our offsprings a better place to live. Firstly, the Industrial revolution, on oneside
Environment plays a key role in social well-being. History is evident, as to how exploitative capitalism has compromised our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
, affecting natural resources. In order to acquire unlimited growth, they are jeopardizing our well-being.
Personally
, I am supporting the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
of
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many
environmentalists, who are triggering our attention towards restoration of our habitats that
eventually
give our offsprings a better place to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
.

Firstly
, the Industrial revolution, on
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oneside

IELTS essay Some think the current generation should take steps to protect the environment for the next generation.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
68 words
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