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Some think that when on holiday in foreign country to stay in hotel is not best way to know country and people. What is your opinion about it?

Some think that when on holiday in foreign country to stay in hotel is not best way to know country and people. What is your opinion about it? LBa13

It is considered by some people that living abroad in a hotel during a local holiday is not the best to learn a lot about the country and citizens. I strongly disagree with the opinion due to the fact that not not only the staff can provide you information about all events and interesting places nearby but they can also give you some advices that can help you to avoid problems. First of all, in majority of countries around the world, hotels are the only places meet all the criteria for accept tourists from all the world. There visiters can be provided service of guides and interpreters that can organize a tour across all the local attractions as well as tell them a lot about the holiday and its history. Taking service of high-quallified guides allows to learn the country's culture a way more quickly than by reading books. Secondly, quite often it happens so that an attempt to live among the locals or participation in some public events can have awful consequences for travellers. No always the threat can be reasoned by some criminals or country's laws. Sometimes dishes considered as a part and parcel of local culture can be dangerous to a foreighner due to way of its preparation or some ingridients. So, for unprepared tourist if he or she does not suffer during the trip the key to success it to choose a hotel for the residence. In conclusion, for an average tourists staying in a hotel will be the best solution if they want to get maximum positive emotions without any risk.

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some
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people
 that living abroad in a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
 during a local holiday is not the best to learn a lot about the country and citizens.

I strongly
 disagree with the opinion due to the fact that Double negatives are discouraged in standard English. Can you reformulate this phrase or is a comma missing?
not not
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only
 the staff can provide you information about all This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
 and interesting places nearby

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but
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some
 advices that can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you to avoid problems.

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hotels
 are the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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meet
 all the criteria for accept tourists from all the world. There

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visiters
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tell
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holiday
 and its history. Taking service of Possible spelling mistake found.
high-quallified
 guides This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorizes
allows
 to learn the country's culture a way more quickly
 than by reading books.

Secondly
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often
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so
 that an attempt to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 among the locals or participation in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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events
 can have awful consequences

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for
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travellers
. No always the threat can be reasoned
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some
 criminals or country's laws. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
Sometimes
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This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterLocal
local
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dangerous
 to a Possible spelling mistake found.foreigner
foreighner
 due to way of its preparation or This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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ingridients
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, for unprepared tourist if he or she does not suffer

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterDuring
during
 the trip the key to success it to choose a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
 for the residence.

In conclusion
, for an average tourists staying in a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
 will be the best solution if they want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 maximum This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 emotions without any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazarddanger
risk
. 