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The following flowchart shows the drinking water system in a housing complex.

The following flowchart shows the drinking water system in a housing complex. mWaKq
The flowchart describes the working of drinking water system in a housing complex. Overall, the driking water system starts with ground tank all the way to households and for drinking purposes. water is purified by passing along four stages in detail including the filters for the household and special ultraviolet disinfection is performed before it is supplied for drinking. In the intial stage water in ground tank is carried out with the help of ball valve and check valve. Simultaneously water from overahead tank is collected in the similar manner as ground tank and the collected water is collected in automatic water system where water is cholirnated through means of chlorination system Then, water is transferred to retention tank followed by deletion of sediments with the help of sediment removal filter and it undergoes further treatment of actiavted carbon filtration. Further water can be supplied to household. However, ultraviolet disinfection is perfomed before uitilizing the proceesed water for drinking.
The flowchart
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describes
the working of drinking
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water
system in a housing complex.

Overall
, the
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driking
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water
system
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starts
with ground
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tank
all the way to households and for drinking purposes.
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water
is purified
by passing along four stages in detail including the filters for the household and special ultraviolet disinfection
is performed
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before
it
is supplied
for drinking.

In the
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intial
stage
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water
in ground
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tank
is carried
out with the
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help
of ball valve and
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check
valve.
Simultaneously
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water
from
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overahead
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tank
is collected
in the similar manner as ground
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tank
and the collected
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water
is collected
in automatic
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water
system where
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water
is
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cholirnated
through means of chlorination system

Then,
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water
is transferred
to retention
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tank
followed by deletion of sediments with the
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help
of sediment removal filter and it undergoes
further
treatment of
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actiavted
carbon filtration.
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Further
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water
can
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to household.
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, ultraviolet disinfection is
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perfomed
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before
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uitilizing
the
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proceesed
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water
for drinking.
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IELTS essay The following flowchart shows the drinking water system in a housing complex.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
159 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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