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Describe about your goals in this year

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Getting into favorite university is one of the most dream for every high school students. That is the reason why many students prepare hard in order to achieve their goal. Certainly, I want to achieve my goal too. My goal is preparing to entered in the university by study hard and get enough rest. I want to keep balancing both study and take a rest in order to have both good mental and physical health. For my preparing about my goal, I will be described in the following paragraphs. My plan to have more study hard in various subjects has two main ways. Firstly, I will wake up early to studying 5-6 hours every day by study mathematics and science in the morning then study English in the afternoon. Moreover, I will recite the English vocabulary every night before getting on bed. Secondly, doing word problems after studying is a positive way too because it can indicate that you understand or not. By the way, having enough rest is significant thing that everyone must have. I have thought two effective ways to get enough rest for doing while I am preparing for my goal. Initially, sleeping early is the important way that everyone must do. For example, I will sleep at 4pm every night in order to be refreshed in the next morning. Next, I will drink a lot of water because many experts have said that water not only can help to be not sleepy but also make good health. In conclusion, to have effective preparing for the favorite university, I will study hard coupled with get enough rest to complete my goal.
Getting into favorite university is one of the most dream for every high school students.
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students prepare
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too. My
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is preparing to
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hard
and
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get
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rest
. I want to
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keep
balancing both
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study
and take a
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rest
in order to have both
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good
mental and physical health. For my preparing about my
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goal
, I will be
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described
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My plan to have more
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study
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hard
in various subjects has two main
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ways
.
Firstly
, I will wake up early to studying 5-6 hours every day by
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study
mathematics and science in the morning then
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study
English in the afternoon.
Moreover
, I will recite the English vocabulary every night
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before
getting on bed.
Secondly
, doing word problems after studying is a
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positive
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way
too
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because
it can indicate that you understand or not.

By the
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, having
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enough
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rest
is significant thing that everyone
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must
have. I have
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two effective
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ways
to
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get
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enough
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rest
for doing while I am preparing for my
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goal
.
Initially
, sleeping early is the
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important
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way
that everyone
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must
do.
For example
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be refreshed
in the
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Next
, I will drink
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a lot of
water
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because
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many
experts have said that water not
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only
can
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help
to be not sleepy
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also
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make
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good
health.

In conclusion
, to have effective preparing for the favorite university, I will
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study
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hard
coupled with
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enough
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to complete my
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IELTS essay Describe about your goals in this year

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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