These days, in certain countries, there are legislations which prevent young ones who are under 16 from leaving school so as to enter the workforce. This is a good approach to prevent exploitation of children and it would allow teenagers concentrate on their studies.
Firstly, when young ones are not permitted to stop their education in order to work, they would be able to focus on their studies. This is because full-time work would prevent children from having the mental strength needed to gain knowledge and skills. For instance, a recent study conducted by the Ministry of Education in Nigeria found out that young ones involved in full-time work do not excel in their academies when offered the opportunity to attend evening classes due to the demand and stress from work. If these children were not allowed to enter the workforce, they would have been able to concentrate on their education.
Furthermore, young ones could be easily cheated by employers. In other words, they may not fully understand the details in work contracts. As a result, they could be paid less that the expected wage or they may be forced to work for longer hours. For example, due to the limited experience of teenagers in Nigeria, they are often paid salaries below the National Minimum Wage and work incentives given to the older employees may not be offered to them. This would have been prevented if underage persons were not allowed to work at the detriment of their education.
In conclusion, laws that prevent children who are under 16 from stopping their education so as to work
k full-time are enacted in some countries in order to ensure that children are not exploited and they can focus on their education. These merits should be promoted in nations yet to enact these laws
These days, in certain countries, there are
legislations
which
prevent
young
ones
who are under 16 from leaving school
so as to
enter the workforce. This is a
good
approach to
prevent
exploitation of
children
and it would
allow
teenagers
concentrate on their studies.
Firstly
, when
young
ones
are not permitted to
stop
their
education
in order to
work
, they would be able to focus on their studies. This is
because
full-time
work
would
prevent
children
from having the mental strength needed to gain knowledge and
skills
.
For instance
, a recent study conducted by the Ministry of
Education
in Nigeria found out that
young
ones
involved in full-time
work
do not excel in their academies when offered the opportunity to attend evening classes due to the demand and
stress
from
work
. If these
children
were not
allowed
to enter the workforce, they would have been able to concentrate on their education.
Furthermore
,
young
ones
could be
easily
cheated by employers.
In other words
, they may not
fully
understand the
details
in
work
contracts.
As a result
, they could
be paid
less that the
expected
wage or
they may
be forced
to
work
for longer hours.
For example
, due to the limited experience of
teenagers
in Nigeria, they are
often
paid salaries below the National Minimum Wage and
work
incentives
given
to the older employees may not
be offered
to them. This would have been
prevented
if underage persons were not
allowed
to
work
at the detriment of their education.
In conclusion
, laws that
prevent
children
who are under 16 from stopping their
education
so as to
work
k full-time
are enacted
in
some
countries in order to ensure that
children
are not
exploited and
they can focus on their
education
. These merits should
be promoted
in nations
yet
to enact these
laws
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