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Some think that environmental problem are too big for individuals to be solved while,other think that individuals can not solve this problem unless government make some action discuss both view and give your opinion

Some think that environmental problem are too big for individuals to be solved while, other think that individuals can not solve this problem unless government make some action discuss both view and give your opinion oeDB
It is reckoned by myriad people that solving ambience issues by individuals is large barrier. However, other masses ponder that environmental obstacles can not be solved without government help. Whereas, I harbour that latter scenario is correct. To address, why it has became major issue to solve by folks, it is crucial to fathom two factors: Initially, it is irrefutable truth that humans have busy schedule, they do not have enough time to concentrate on environmental problems. To conspicuous, in every field competition level is burgeoning at alarming rate in order that more money could be chased owing to this they do not take environment problem seriously. Furthermore, in this fast paced epoch, several people are busy in solving family problems. To support, due to escalating luxury lifestyle, they invest large time on work as well as family bonding is destroying day by day. For instance, proliferating desires of people to have all modern facilities, became a main reason to create gap between family relations. In brief, along with having busy time table individuals are not able to solve these problems. Looking at flip side, government should take some steps pertaining to overcome these problems. To explain, pollution is increasing at an unprecedented speed while, nobody want to sacrifice their comforts which is reason of rising several type of pollutions and deforestation. A survey conducted by William Douglas - professor of Harvard university -starts that - in 2018, in the UK awareness camps become extremely worthwhile to save environment, government became 55 percent successful to curb pollution. As a result, upon making rule by government, people could be followed this. To epitomise, it can be reiterated that although environmental is big problem to solve by folks because they are habitual of comfortable lifestyle, with the help of government people can became aware regarding their obligations
It
is reckoned
by myriad
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people
that solving ambience issues by individuals is large barrier.
However
, other masses ponder that environmental obstacles can not
be solved
without
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government
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
.
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Whereas
, I
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harbour
that latter scenario is correct.

To address, why it has
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became
major issue to solve by folks, it is crucial to fathom two factors:
Initially
, it is irrefutable truth that humans have busy schedule, they do not have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
time to concentrate on environmental
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problems
. To conspicuous, in every field competition level is burgeoning at alarming rate in order that more money could
be chased
owing to this they do not take environment
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problem
seriously
.
Furthermore
, in this
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fast
paced epoch, several
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people
are busy in solving family
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problems
. To support, due to escalating luxury lifestyle, they invest large time on work
as well
as family bonding is destroying day by day.
For instance
, proliferating desires of
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people
to have all modern facilities,
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became
a main reason to create gap between family relations.
In brief
, along with having busy time table individuals are not able to solve these problems.

Looking at flip side,
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government
should take
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some
steps pertaining to overcome these
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problems
. To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
, pollution is increasing at an unprecedented speed while, nobody
The pronoun 'nobody' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "wants", "wanted".
want
to sacrifice their comforts which is reason of rising
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several type
of pollutions and deforestation. A survey conducted by William Douglas
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-
professor of
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Harvard university
-
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starts
that
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-
in 2018, in the UK awareness camps become
extremely
worthwhile to save environment,
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government
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became
55 percent successful to curb pollution.
As a result
, upon making
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rule
by
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government
,
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people
could
be followed
this.

To
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epitomise
, it can
be reiterated
that although environmental is
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big
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problem
to solve by folks
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because
they are habitual of comfortable lifestyle, with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of
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government
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
became
aware regarding their obligations

IELTS essay Some think that environmental problem are too big for individuals to be solved while, other think that individuals can not solve this problem unless government make some action discuss both view and give your opinion

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
304 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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