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Some students write papers whereas some others write tests. Which one do you prefer and why? Give specific reasons and examples to support your stand. v.1

Some students write papers whereas some others write tests. Which one do you prefer and why? Give specific reasons and examples to support your stand. v. 1
If we look at the news and media trends over the last few years, we will notice that only problems and emergencies grab the attention of the media outlets and any positive development are ignored and not given priority. As suggested by some, this has an adverse effect on the individuals and the community as a whole and I agree with this. Everything we interact with in our daily lives has an impact on our mood and it may determine how we will spend the rest of our day. Instantly, while going to work we turn on the radio and tune in to our favourite news channel, if the news feed only highlights accidents, wars, and other similar stories, then it will dampen our mood and will affect the way we will do our work and interact with people. However, if we hear about something positive, like a new park opened in the city or a news that our team has won the volleyball match, it would lift our spirits for the rest of the day. Too much of negative news creates anxiety and depression in the society. But it is also a fact that its media’s responsibility to provide factual and unbiased news and information to the public. Media should not just hold back news considering its negative impact on the society, but a balance should be maintained between them. To conclude the discussion, I would say that I agree with the view that the media’s love for reporting the problems and emergencies for sensationalism is not good for the well being of individuals and society as a whole.
If we look at the
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news
and
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media
trends over the last few years, we will notice that
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only
problems and emergencies grab the attention of the
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media
outlets and any
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positive
development are
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ignored
and not
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given
priority. As suggested by
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some
, this has an adverse effect on the individuals and the community as a whole and I
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agree
with this.

Everything we interact with in our daily
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lives
has an impact on our mood and it may determine how we will spend the rest of our day.
Instantly
, while going to work we turn on the radio and tune in to our
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favourite
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news
channel, if the
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feed
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only
highlights accidents, wars, and other similar stories, then it will dampen our mood and will affect the way we will do our work and interact with
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people
.
However
, if we hear about something
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positive
, like a
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new
park opened in the city or a
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news
that our team has won the volleyball match, it would lift our spirits for the rest of the day.

Too much of
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negative
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news
creates anxiety and depression in the society.
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But
it is
also
a fact that its
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media’s
responsibility to provide factual and unbiased
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news
and information to the public.
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Media
should not
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just
hold back
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news
considering its
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negative
impact on the society,
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but
a balance should
be maintained
between them.

To conclude
the discussion, I would say that I
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agree
with the view that the
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media’s
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love
for reporting the problems and emergencies for sensationalism is not
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good
for the
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well being
of individuals and society as a whole.
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IELTS essay Some students write papers whereas some others write tests. Which one do you prefer and why? Give specific reasons and examples to support your stand. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
270 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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